tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post4616942167736656800..comments2023-11-03T15:50:56.001+01:00Comments on POET IN RESIDENCE : Avant-Stevens (1)Gwil Whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post-17798395827577335652010-01-22T09:08:27.321+01:002010-01-22T09:08:27.321+01:00Thanks Jinksy, Weaver and Gordon. So pleased you a...Thanks Jinksy, Weaver and Gordon. So pleased you all like it!<br /><br />It would be an incredible experience to have the eyes and ears and the sensations of being an owl in a tree for just one night.Gwil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post-59906561794328098022010-01-21T19:43:49.343+01:002010-01-21T19:43:49.343+01:00I love the rhythm, the clever internal rhymes - th...I love the rhythm, the clever internal rhymes - the whole sense of movement - brilliant.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post-45571399189970751052010-01-21T14:53:41.741+01:002010-01-21T14:53:41.741+01:00oops - sorry about the noisey noisyoops - sorry about the noisey noisyJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post-136447503722775502010-01-21T14:49:24.495+01:002010-01-21T14:49:24.495+01:00I really want this bit to say
The windows are gol...I really want this bit to say<br /><br />The windows are gold and the shadows are bold; <br />they rattle and rumble and clack on the track. <br /><br />as I'd enjoy the idea of noisey shadows... Fascinating rhythms all through the whole piece, stopping and starting like a train...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8881054030497725613.post-53592339176183324962010-01-21T13:24:59.904+01:002010-01-21T13:24:59.904+01:00What a great rhythm to this poem. And I like the i...What a great rhythm to this poem. And I like the images, particularly the 'scrabble of branches' for words.Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.com