Tuesday, 8 February 2011

One night

in the trees
the wind was
a train crossing fields

and somehow
they heard the call
of an owl

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gw2011
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6 comments:

  1. hking9 February 2011 at 03:38

    Beautiful!

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  2. Gwil W9 February 2011 at 08:24

    Many thanks!

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  3. John McDonald9 February 2011 at 09:31

    enjoyed this Gwilym
    john

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  4. Gwil W9 February 2011 at 15:29

    Cheers!

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  5. Gordon Mason9 February 2011 at 22:00

    Great near rhymes, Gwilym, add to the images.

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  6. Gwil W9 February 2011 at 22:15

    Thanks Gordon.
    By the way, I know now why I missed your lovely top hat poem first time round - it's because there are twin images of green fields in the fault line series you've got on there. My own fault entirely!

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