Thursday, 7 November 2013

haiku double-take (2)



 drunkenly draped 
 frost bitten 
 begonias 

       - - - John McDonald


 old heads bent 
 and withered   
 golden crown roses

      - - - Gwilym Williams


4 comments:

  1. Sounds as though you have had a frost there Gwil.

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  2. Weather been awful, very chilly winds, but better now. Sunny and warm today. I'm full of cold. I'm now going to eat some chili beans! Sweat it out I hope.

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  3. thats us - old heads bent (not quite withered yet)
    john

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  4. I guess it's autumnal we are John.

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