Thursday, 26 June 2014

From Singing Lines





SINGING  LINES  

WITH WOODEN STRIDES  

POWER  ON  THE  HILL


 WOODEN RHYMES 

WERE     STRIDING    WIDE 

WHERE ALL THE WORLD STOOD STILL



ON A SUMMER'S DAY



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9 comments:

  1. Rachel Phillips26 June 2014 at 20:35

    ... on a Summer's day.

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  2. Gwil W27 June 2014 at 09:38


    Scans nicely, thanks.

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  3. The Weaver of Grass27 June 2014 at 20:42

    I like the idea of the wooden stride Gwil.

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  4. Gwil W27 June 2014 at 20:45

    We must keep marching on Pat.

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  5. Rachel Phillips3 July 2014 at 13:45

    What happened to my contribution "on a Summer's day"?
    I thought it fitted but it is your poem, I suppose I will have to write my own for the line to have somewhere to go.

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  6. Gwil W3 July 2014 at 15:15

    Phew! it's hot. Rachel, thanks for the line - yes, now in!!!

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  7. Gwil W3 July 2014 at 15:16

    With the addition of Rachel's line I feel it's now complete. So there I will leave it.

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    1. Rachel Phillips3 July 2014 at 16:08

      It has an ending. Perhaps I will write a poem beginning with the same line.

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  8. Gwil W3 July 2014 at 16:30

    N0w it is finished. And all in orange. Is it a World Cup omen? Well we shall see.

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