Paris
Preach hate
to broken youth;
indoctrinate the violence;
paradise at the end of it.
Paris.
George Szirtes (see Links) recently covered the subject of the cinquain, a five line form made famous by Adelaide Crapsey. My cinquain 'Paris' was posted today as a 'reply' on Magyar Haiku (see Links).
Yup, that's good. It has a potentially epigrammatic effect but can be slowed down and made rhythmically more complex.
ReplyDeleteGreetings and many thanks, George.
DeleteAn excellent example
ReplyDeleteThank you again, Pat.
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