Poet-in-Residence enjoys the haiku form, both to read and to compose. A variant of the form is when a series of three haiku fits neatly together with some kind of common theme to form a linked haiku story. For this form of haiku Poet-in-Residence has coined the word haikutrio. He trusts that haiku purists will not be too offended by this. After all, poetry is nothing if it not a living, moving, developing art.
This morning dawned crisp and cheery. At long last the thaw had arrived. And so, an early morning walk through the nearby country park was a priority. Perhaps, encouraged by the weather and the With Words website (see A-Z sidebar LINKS) there was indeed an haikutrio to be found:
haikutrio
In the snow
looking for pigs -
I find cloven footprints
Caged parrot shrieks
when I hurry by -
hands deep in pockets
Dazzled by sunlight
an old woman greets me -
believes I'm the priest
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gwilym williams
16/1/09
Pigs seem to play quite a large part in your life, Poet. Do you keep them, live near them or what? I love them, they are such intelligent creatures - could probably write haikutrios themselves if only they could speak. Like the trio by the way.
ReplyDeleteHello Weaver,
ReplyDeleteI love to visit the pigs, they are only 5-10 minutes walk away, ah if they could speak what tales they could spin.
loved these. - by the way Gwilym thanks for reminding me about the heron I took it out to look at it again and forgot all about it
ReplyDeleteaye john
Thanks John. I reckon your heron haiku is super. It could win a prize.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the haiku sequence, and nothing wrong with calling it haikutrio! ;-)
ReplyDeleteI think the 'haiku form' is one of the most flexible of poetry forms since it goes with prose 'haibun'; artwork as 'haiga'; and of course originated from renga.
You might be interested in rengay too:
Garry Gay's rengay
all my best,
Alan
With Words
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Thanks Alan. I see that the Rengay is a 6-linked sequence with a photo. The one I've just looked at, the sepia photo one, is quite something, especially the second verse I thought was very good.
ReplyDeleteHi PiR,
ReplyDeleteI can highly recommend "The Unlocked Gate" By Garry Gay and John Thompson.
all my best,
Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2009
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Thanks Alan. Much appreciated.
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