Sunday 23 January 2011

haiku


my walls are now empty
° except for the holes °
where hooks used to be



gw2011
inspired by Zaina Anwar to whom my thanks
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4 comments:

  1. John McDonald23 January 2011 at 09:52

    love it Gwilym
    john

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  2. The Weaver of Grass23 January 2011 at 10:06

    This haiku is definitely a metaphor in itself.

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  3. Zaina Anwar23 January 2011 at 16:04

    Awwwww, how lovely, Gwilym. Thank you so much. Shadows and holes: symbols of memories or what used to be.

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  4. Gwil W23 January 2011 at 20:39

    Zaina, Thanks. I owe it all to you!
    John, thanks too.
    Pat, yes and this is real metaphor upon metaphor - it's a good way.

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