Monday 2 May 2011

haiku

helpful children
bring water for the fish
now on the beach


6 comments:

  1. Good irony, Gwilym :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Yes, this works for me. So typical of kids, wanting to keep the creature close, rather than thinking to pick the fish up and toss it back.

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  3. Devika, John, Jim, appreciated and many thanks.

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  4. Innocence and contradiction; like it.

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