Friday 26 September 2014

haiku



schoolyard scrap 

 two boys with bloody noses

- the teacher breaks it up 

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6 comments:

  1. Rachel Phillips1 October 2014 at 18:49

    Is this during the blossom season?

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  2. Gwil W2 October 2014 at 10:44

    Spring is on the way with a with a gala performance 4 - 1 the boys done good.

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    1. Rachel Phillips2 October 2014 at 15:36

      That is a mysterious reply. Where is the mention of Spring?

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  3. Gwil W2 October 2014 at 16:00

    Rachel, they played with a new found spring in their step. Terrible pun but they you are. And Wenger has been there 18 years so I guess that's a kind of spring too.

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  4. Rachel Phillips4 October 2014 at 08:43

    You are supposed to indirectly mention a season in Haiku. This was extremely indirect and your examples are stretching the spring to its limits. I can do it too..

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  5. Gwil W4 October 2014 at 13:04

    It's all Greek to me, Rachel. Just kidding ....

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