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Friday, 16 July 2010

abroad before dawn

when the long grey cloud
curved into the far horizon
into the grey promise of light
before the first garden birds
had tried their first light
notes the slugs were already here
for the windfalls, the fallen
apricots of the night

and embracing the fruits
with the lengths of their bodies
they chomped through skin and flesh
choosing only the fruitiest globes
now stained with their slime
and then heavy laden and sated
they slipped slowly away, long grey
ships on a still and silent sea

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gw2010

6 comments:

Gordon Mason said...

The first 3 lines almost mirror the slug! Excellent words.

I read the heading to quick and thought it was 'a broad before dawn' and you were a racy chap!

Poet in Residence said...

hello gordon, thanks for the comment, but there's only one "racy chap" around here ... and it ain't me :)
best, gwilym

The Weaver of Grass said...

I have a lot of those long grey ships in my still and silent sea - I hate the wretched things, but your poem does add a touch of magic to them Gwilym.

Poet in Residence said...

Hi Weaver,
when full they look and move like oil tankers but make less mess,
gwilym

seema gupta said...

beautiful poetry to read..thanks for sharing

regards

Poet in Residence said...

seema,
thank your kind words here and on the other post and welcome,
best bardic wishes,
gwilym