Tuesday 8 February 2011

One night

in the trees
the wind was
a train crossing fields

and somehow
they heard the call
of an owl

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gw2011

6 comments:

  1. Great near rhymes, Gwilym, add to the images.

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  2. Thanks Gordon.
    By the way, I know now why I missed your lovely top hat poem first time round - it's because there are twin images of green fields in the fault line series you've got on there. My own fault entirely!

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