Saturday 6 August 2011

Arrivals


With the late-
afternoon
zephyrs
the mountains
in the lake
are rippled
to chaos

The image
relapses
till the breezes
retreat
and all the undulations settle
back
down

to level surface
of mirror

and the mirror
in turn

returns
to reflect

more
evenly

all points
of view


gw2011

2 comments:

  1. I like that Gwilym - it has wider implications I think.

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  2. I think the final finished version is inspired by the poetry of Alice Walker whose blog I've linked with. A most courageous woman. A lovely poet,

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