With the late-
afternoon
zephyrs
the mountains
in the lake
are rippled
to chaos
The image
relapses
till the breezes
retreat
and all the undulations settle
back
down
to level surface
of mirror
and the mirror
in turn
returns
to reflect
more
evenly
all points
of view
gw2011
I like that Gwilym - it has wider implications I think.
ReplyDeleteI think the final finished version is inspired by the poetry of Alice Walker whose blog I've linked with. A most courageous woman. A lovely poet,
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