Thursday, 22 September 2011

haiku


unheard in the wilderness
the occasional clicks of the stones
interrupted by silence

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7 comments:

  1. John McDonald23 September 2011 at 09:23

    nice one Gwilym
    john

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  2. Gwil W26 September 2011 at 17:01

    Thanks John, and cheers!

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  3. Anonymous26 September 2011 at 23:06

    like the silence at the end, its always nice to end in silence, to much noise in the mountains

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  4. Gwil W27 September 2011 at 15:14

    for a long time - no noise other than these 'talking' stones - not even a stir of air - not even a drowsy bee -
    only the sound of silence

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  5. Anonymous27 September 2011 at 16:28

    so the stones make noise, i got that part, no place is silent---when ur with yourself always. i did enjoy that poem, thank you

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  6. Gwil W27 September 2011 at 17:13

    The silence of the wilderness is always a special silence I think. The hum of a stray bee sounds as loud as a bus!

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  7. Anonymous27 September 2011 at 19:36

    u miss the asa, but fair point.

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