been looking through
the windows
at the clouds
outside and all
week long
I've been waiting
to go outside
to the street
but the clouds
were always there
and I was afraid
it might rain. No-
one knows
more about rain
than those clouds
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There is something rather nice about having a poem written especially for someone. Lovely poem too Gwil.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, glad you like it. Mike McLaren is a musician in the US. He has a blog I like called Annotated Margins. He's a cool dude.
ReplyDeletePat, I now deleted the last 2 words. I think the abrupt ending here is stronger.
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