Saturday, 15 September 2012

Cloud Story (for Mike McLaren)

All week long I've
been looking through
the windows

at the clouds
outside and all
week long

I've been waiting
to go outside
to the street

but the clouds
were always there
and I was afraid

it might rain. No-
one knows
more about rain

than those clouds


  1. There is something rather nice about having a poem written especially for someone. Lovely poem too Gwil.

  2. Thanks Pat, glad you like it. Mike McLaren is a musician in the US. He has a blog I like called Annotated Margins. He's a cool dude.

  3. Pat, I now deleted the last 2 words. I think the abrupt ending here is stronger.


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