Wednesday, 17 August 2011

haiku


the long-bearded man

and a girl with a helium balloon

stand on the corner

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8 comments:

  1. richard18 August 2011 at 00:21

    Long-bearded man
    grabs the girl
    ballon floats free

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  2. The Weaver of Grass18 August 2011 at 16:17

    Good imagery here Gwilym

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  3. Gwil W18 August 2011 at 19:40

    Maybe its a cross roads ;)

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  4. Gordon Mason19 August 2011 at 20:51

    long-bearded man
    stands on corner; girl floats off
    with helium balloon

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  5. Gwil W19 August 2011 at 21:44

    she'd be well advised to . . . go her own way

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  6. ariverflowsby20 August 2011 at 00:13

    Okay. How about:

    Girl kicks long-bearded man
    in the nuts
    and runs away laughing

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  7. Gwil W20 August 2011 at 09:33

    LOL Richard! ;)

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  8. Gwil W20 August 2011 at 09:34

    Gordon,
    Thanks for the new poem on the Martian website.
    Cheers!
    Gwilym

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