Long-bearded mangrabs the girlballon floats free
Good imagery here Gwilym
Maybe its a cross roads ;)
long-bearded manstands on corner; girl floats offwith helium balloon
she'd be well advised to . . . go her own way
Okay. How about:Girl kicks long-bearded manin the nutsand runs away laughing
LOL Richard! ;)
Gordon,Thanks for the new poem on the Martian website. Cheers! Gwilym
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Long-bearded man
grabs the girl
ballon floats free
Good imagery here Gwilym
Maybe its a cross roads ;)
long-bearded man
stands on corner; girl floats off
with helium balloon
she'd be well advised to . . . go her own way
Okay. How about:
Girl kicks long-bearded man
in the nuts
and runs away laughing
LOL Richard! ;)
Gordon,
Thanks for the new poem on the Martian website.
Cheers!
Gwilym
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