Wednesday 17 August 2011

haiku


the long-bearded man

and a girl with a helium balloon

stand on the corner

8 comments:

  1. Long-bearded man
    grabs the girl
    ballon floats free

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  2. long-bearded man
    stands on corner; girl floats off
    with helium balloon

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  3. she'd be well advised to . . . go her own way

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  4. Okay. How about:

    Girl kicks long-bearded man
    in the nuts
    and runs away laughing

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  5. Gordon,
    Thanks for the new poem on the Martian website.
    Cheers!
    Gwilym

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