Friday 2 September 2011

haiku

the sun warms the sand
he stands to attention
over a shadow

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Searching for water
(I'd settle for a mirage)
No clouds in the sky

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7 comments:

  1. Gordon Mason2 September 2011 at 14:31

    braw wee haiku, Gwilym ... and the photo could lead to many more; looks like the roof of the world.

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  2. Gwil W2 September 2011 at 17:28

    Thanks Gordon, I'll build!

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  3. The Weaver of Grass2 September 2011 at 17:33

    Love the solitary nature of the photograph which goes so well with the economy of words in a haiku Gwilym.

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  4. Gwil W2 September 2011 at 18:23

    Thank you Pat, as does your blog photo of Dominic in the lake!

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  5. John McDonald3 September 2011 at 09:26

    spot on Gwilym
    john

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  6. Dominic Rivron3 September 2011 at 15:47

    Good ones. (Do I notice that 5-7-5 crops up more often these days in your haiku?).

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  7. Gwil W3 September 2011 at 20:38

    John, thanks!

    Dominic, I think you're right. Of course, it could all suddenly change back to chaos again! And at any moment . . .

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